呵呵,鼓励楼主一下。。。不过我对这个游戏不是很感兴趣。。。
还有,楼主要好好完善一下你的英语水平,你里面写:But(语法错误) the moster(错字,正确的词是monster)called "firedragon",He(语法啊~~~!而且怪物应该用it而不是he吧?) abducted Summer and run(过去时) away quickly...Just disappeared(just后面能跟过去时?)form my eyes(建议改成view)..What's the fuckn' sick!(好好批评你一下,你怎么连粗话都说不标准呢?正确的是:What the fuck and sick!,以后也请不要用不文明词语,建议改为What the hell was that?) [s:5]